Editing the first verse

Our group has made slight adjustments to the editing as we thought the close-up of Syed's mouth looked a bit unusual as when the bridge shots were edited successfully with the lipsynching accurate it seemed as though we could have various shots of the bridge used instead of the close-up of his mouth.

The first verse has a close-up shot of Syed on the bridge, a medium shot of him on the bridge and the begining has a pan shot of him walking on the bridge turning in to a long shot.
We also used some effects to make our music video look more professional such as cross-fading and desaturate shots that were filmed to be used as 'reminiscing' shots e.g shots of Syed performing then have shots of Syed and Chelsea together so it looks like he is remembering her.

We have done a lot more filming of Syed and Chelsea in different locations that would be used as 'reminiscing' shots such as in a park and at a walk way of them both happy and fighting. However we still lack footage as we feel we need to re-film some shots and need Syed to re-lipsynch some parts of the second verse and the last verse.

The majority of the original music video, 'Mario - How do i breathe', http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cuXxSVJG41o, is based on disjunctured shots e.g rotating the shot, having the performer upside down and the location upside down. On the other hand there are a hand full of reminsing shots and lipsynching. We have based our music video on lipsynching and reminiscing shots but might have disjuncture if we feel we need to as at the moment we feel the cross-fading effects leading in to jump-cut shots that are desaturated in to a fainter colour work effectively along side and seem like Syed's looking back on his memories.